Stretching my legs posted by Kiron on September 7, 2009

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Hey, what's up, you guys? I'm doing some writing warm-ups, but I'm wondering where my weak points in writing are. What do you guys think of my action scenes? Do they read well? I mean, I like 'em, but that's because I know exactly how I envision them. It's like forgetting to explain a plot point because you already know about it yourself (something I've most likely already done at least once.) But what do you guys think?

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